Chapter 10 is all about being able to add more words in your Writing and knowing where it is the proper place to add those words. It also made me realize that we have learned to take out a lot of words from our writing. Most of the time if you start omitting to many words the writing might start sounding a little short with what you want to say. One just has to make sure that when you start adding words to your sentences that they don't become to overwhelming. Also you have to make sure to what you are adding more words to and that if it is the proper thing to add it to.
I would use this chapter in my future writing because it can help me expand my writing and know what the proper way is to do it. Also when i want to add more words that I would not expand my sentences to long that the would just be on going sentences but that at the end they would make sense. And that when someone will read it they wont drift off and just think that the my sentences are going to be to long; but that with that I can be able to get to the point and explain my self more clearly.
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