Should Toshio and Kiyoshi be responsible for their family's debt? essay #4

It doesn’t seem right that a the kids should take the fault for something that the parents have done, especially when the kids didn’t know what was actually going on and the decisions that the parents take that made them be indent.

If Toshio and Kiyoshi end up being responsible for their families’ debt they would have trouble starting their own life because of their families dept. It would seem like it would be hard to try to start your own life. But before you can you have to figure out how to finish your families and you don’t know how long it would take for them to be able to start fresh.

Families debt can hold someone back specially when you don’t know how far in your family can be and it can make people not trust you or things will just be harder to be accomplished because of the background the your family might have.

"All I asking for is my body" Part 3

At the end of the story Kyoshi figures out a way to help out his family he realizes that the only way he can release his family from depth is to join the military. No matter what way he would make it back his parents would be able to get money from the military (dead or alive). So when he left and started to make money he would send it to his parents so they can pay off what they owed then he realized the he became really good at gambling. That helped him be able to send more money back home and be able to free his family from all the depth they were in because they would have to deal with it eventually.

So he was able to help out his family so much and was able to pull them through so they can all start fresh and not have to worry about it. Him doing all this for his family and being able to set everything a side just to free his family from everything was incredible. To help the people that you love and to do what ever it takes to help them and not to see them suffer is what family is all about and all they wanted was to be able to live with a sense of freedom and he was able to give that to them.

Chapter 10

Chapter 10 is all about being able to add more words in your Writing and knowing where it is the proper place to add those words. It also made me realize that we have learned to take out a lot of words from our writing. Most of the time if you start omitting to many words the writing might start sounding a little short with what you want to say. One just has to make sure that when you start adding words to your sentences that they don't become to overwhelming. Also you have to make sure to what you are adding more words to and that if it is the proper thing to add it to.

I would use this chapter in my future writing because it can help me expand my writing and know what the proper way is to do it. Also when i want to add more words that I would not expand my sentences to long that the would just be on going sentences but that at the end they would make sense. And that when someone will read it they wont drift off and just think that the my sentences are going to be to long; but that with that I can be able to get to the point and explain my self more clearly.